First of all, I'm such a sucker for h/c that I loved Cain fussing over Glitch's scrape. Then I *really* loved how you used that moment to introduce more interaction between Cain and Jeb, and then the very natural transition to Glitch's conversation with Raw ... *sigh* ... this was very well-crafted.
And I even liked Glitch's verbally pushing Cain away in the tent, because it really is too soon. *glares at surr* You make me suffer and like it!
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Date: 2009-01-23 02:58 am (UTC)And I even liked Glitch's verbally pushing Cain away in the tent, because it really is too soon. *glares at surr* You make me suffer and like it!