“Everything is wrong and I’m just a convenience. Please, Cain. Don’t be one of those men. Don’t use me.”
Just take my heart out and stomp on it why don't you? T_T I think that that sentence was quite possibly the most heartbreaking sentence you have ever written... and I love it.
I love how Raw basically pouted when he saw Glitch was hurt and he hadn't been called for right away.
I love how you captured the interaction between Cain & Jeb perfectly.
I hate... absolutely nothing of this story. Each sentence is beautiful and leaves me wanting for more. If you ever write a book let me know because I'm going to buy it.
Oh! Could you describe Glitch's chain's, or rather how they are attached? I have a couple of idea's in my head for it but I'm not sure which is right.
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Just take my heart out and stomp on it why don't you? T_T I think that that sentence was quite possibly the most heartbreaking sentence you have ever written... and I love it.
I love how Raw basically pouted when he saw Glitch was hurt and he hadn't been called for right away.
I love how you captured the interaction between Cain & Jeb perfectly.
I hate... absolutely nothing of this story. Each sentence is beautiful and leaves me wanting for more. If you ever write a book let me know because I'm going to buy it.
Oh! Could you describe Glitch's chain's, or rather how they are attached? I have a couple of idea's in my head for it but I'm not sure which is right.