ext_68556 ([identity profile] lionille.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] surranndie 2009-01-18 02:02 am (UTC)

eeeeeeeee! You altered the fantastic dancer speech so brilliantly!

and then later:

like I blend right in with the stage curtains.”

You! Brilliant!

His grin was crooked and devious

Hee! And it always makes my heart pound, too.

“That is definitely not a good look for you.”

Mwah! This should have been canon. In fact, Glitch said this in a deleted scene, I'm sure of it!

as all he could think was that the black leather was most assuredly a good look for Glitch.

*shivers happily!* Ooh, what an intriging thought!

I loved everyone being properly concerned after the wrench incident, Cain's panic, DG's apology...

“It’s okay, doll,” Glitch’s smile was tight with pain.

Oh, that's just what he would have said, too, been all forgiving...

Also, I liked Cain's little insights into Glitch's personality throughout this and the understanding he has for him, like why he gets stuck on one thought and seemingly can't let it go, etc.

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