This one was a hard one to balance - it was supposed to be Ambrose/Glitch but Cain always has to butt his fat head into their lives! :D So, it's good to know that it worked despite that!! I'm so glad you mentioned how the OC is used - that's exactly how I try to use them, as ways to further the story without the characters themselves having to state obvious things that make no sense for the scene. That's what OCs are for - exposition!
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Date: 2008-11-26 03:31 am (UTC)