Oh... oh! *stares wonderingly* It's so vivid... I can see it happening, and wow.
Lack of closure seems to work for this piece, at least in my mind. It's not a situation that can have neat closure, so I suppose a story about it won't either. But the bit that we do get to see is so sharp and unexpected, it has it's own -stop-. I think this is a perfect drabble. Thank you.
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Date: 2008-10-07 05:46 am (UTC)Lack of closure seems to work for this piece, at least in my mind. It's not a situation that can have neat closure, so I suppose a story about it won't either. But the bit that we do get to see is so sharp and unexpected, it has it's own -stop-. I think this is a perfect drabble. Thank you.